「一見一筆」
"Snap a Shot, Share a Thought'
PHOTO CAPTION COMPETITION
JLfest 2023
Objective
The competition aims at enhancing written communication skills among Japanese language learners through photo and captions as well as the joy of making stories from words.
Theme: BREAKFAST
Breakfast has been an important part of our life. It connects us to who we are, what our values are, and how we feel.
The mere sight of our favourite or usual food we have for breakfast, its setting or tableware used, and the place or hawker stall we frequent for breakfast could evoke strong memories or emotions.
RESULT ANNOUNCEMENT
This year, 106 entries from 90 contestants. However, 34 entries were disqualified as they did not meet the requirement of the competition,
with judges' comments
Best 10 entries
Ng Kai Ying
Kuala Lumpur
Everytime I look at the bao cooked by my beloved mum, it bring the joy and happiness in me. I can eat these bao all day....how about you?
Wong Wan Rou
Bentong
This photo shows what I made for my sister as her breakfast. I enjoy making breakfast for my family and see how they smile after eating delicious breakfast at the beginning of the day.
幸せな気持ちがリズムのよい日本語で表現されている。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
愛情が伝わる。
TAKAHASHI DAISUKE
Loving message to mother. The picture conveys the caption well.
NG KAR PEK
Clearly delivered.
AZNI AHMAD
The picture and words are nicely matched, judging at how the sausage is prepared.
AZNI AHMAD
朝食を作る側の気持ちが表現されている。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
A show of love by making breakfast for family members.
NG KAR PEK
メッセージ性のある言葉で良い。
TAKAHASHI DAISUKE
Ester Tan Chin Fei
Pulau Pinang
The photo shows the breakfast prepared by my mother before I go to school everyday, which are two buns and a cup of hot drink. The drink represents "1" whereas the buns represents "00", thus forming the number 100. This food and drink arrangement makes me feel more confident to score full marks in my examination.
本人の気持ちも、作ったお母さんの気持ちも感じられる。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
Unique message-特別ー母の気持ち
AZNI AHMAD
Conveys subject matter clearly. Very creative and eye-catching.
NG KAR PEK
Very catchy and interesting wordplay, well blend with the picture.
AZNI AHMAD
A typical breakfast on a typical school day with a reluctant mind relates to all school children.
NG KAR PEK
率直な気持ちがカジュアルな言葉で表現されている。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
Ang Jay Juin
Puchong
The photo features a simple breakfast consisting of a hot drink and two slices of bread, symbolizing the plainness of the morning meal. The stationary and outside view at the top corner implies a student waking up early for breakfast while completing assignments or revising for exams. The picture captures the essence of a student's morning routine, which begins with a simple, yet vital breakfast.
Justin Lee Wenxuan
Kuala Lumpur
I have this muffin for breakfast quite often on weekdays, so I decided to put it in the caption to capture how boring this breakfast sometimes can be, reminding me that today is another school day.
Puteri Nur Farhana Hakem
Masjid Tanah, Melaka
My sister made baked beans and egg for breakfast. It’s my favorite meal for breakfast, I’ve always loved baked beans since I was a kid. Each time I eat them for breakfast, I can’t help but have nostalgia of my childhood. Bonus point if eating this on a rainy day. Good Food, Good Mood!
Well explained with a good picture to represent, the boringness.
AZNI AHMAD
Emotion expressed is relatable to all school children.
NG KAR PEK
率直な気持ちがカジュアルな言葉で表現されている。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
Quite comparable.
AZNI AHMAD
七五調で語呂がよい。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
幸せが伝わる一枚。
TAKAHASHI DAISUKE
Husna Fatini Ahmad Nazari
Perak
I was having breakfast outside my house when my neighbor’s cat came to steal my fish. I was dumbfounded because it managed to do so!
びっくりした瞬間をとらえた写真が印象的。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
A simple message but conveys the emotion well. Interesting snap..
NG KAR PEK
かわいらしくて楽しい一枚。
TAKAHASHI DAISUKE
Angelina Wong Li Qi
Petaling Jaya
Having to wake up at 6am in the morning is tough ! When I wake up late, there is no time to make breakfast, which is why this drink saves the day ! It is delicious and gives me energy for the day.
Nur Batrisya Mohd Rossedi
Bentong
On my birthday, my dad bought me steak for my breakfast. He bought it because it's my favourite food. I really enjoyed the food. I appreciated it very much because my dad remembered my birthday and we celebrated it together.
Simple & clear message & relatable.
AZNI AHMAD
便利なパッケージ飲料があってよかったですね。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
特別な日の特別な朝食の幸せな気分が表れている。
ISOGAYA HIROYUKI
写真と言葉から気持ちが伝わる。
TAKAHASHI DAISUKE
Yong Chng Eu
Cheras, Kuala Lumpur
The caption is used to describe how I felt when eating the biscuit, which was a sense of loneliness as I ate it alone. I used the colour blue as it is a colour usually associated with sadness or loneliness. I wrote「ひとり」in lighter blue to draw attention.
Exactly shown the feeling of boringness.
AZNI AHMAD
The picture catches attention. The feeling of loneliness does happen in real life.
NG KAR PEK
COMMENTS FROM THE JUDGES
'Since there were a lot of contestants in this competition, it was very challenging to make the selection. However, it was a good experience. I think this is a very interesting competition because the contestants need to think of the most appropriate word(s) in Japanese to describe their pictures. Seeing how the contestants put into words and relate them with emotions, feelings, and thoughts was something very interesting, although it was quite tough in making judgments. Overall, thumbs up to the organizer! Thank you so much for giving me this opportunity!'
Azni Ahmad
'Some contestants were very creative and successfully snapped a shot to share a thought. It is advisable for the contestants to read the General Rules more thoroughly before submitting any work in the future. Otherwise, their effort would be wasted.'
NG Kar Pek
「センスが光る写真やキャプションが満載で、とても楽しみながら審査することができました。 今後も日本への関心を抱き続け、日本語学習を継続していただけたら大変嬉しく思います。 数々の素敵な作品に出会わせてくださり、ありがとうございました!」
TAKAHASHI Daisuke
'Saya berasa gembira melihat masakan yang berasal dari pelbagai kaum digemari sebagai sarapan pagi Malaysia oleh kaum lain juga.'
ISOGAYA Hiroyuki